This should be at the top of your response to tonight's RAMS question.
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Tonight I read ___ written by ___. I read page ___ through page ___.
2. Think about the text you read tonight and change something that happened. Start your
paragraph by telling what happened in the book, then tell me how you would change
what happened and why.
After reading my book tonight there is one thing I would change.
3. Answer in paragraph form!
TOPIC sentence
Example: If I could, I might make a change in what happened in the book I reading tonight.
+ 2-3 DETAIL sentences
Examples: In the story...
If I were the author
+ WRAP UP (Conclusion) sentence
4. Use Read & Write Gold to LISTEN to what you wrote and correct errors.
Tonight I read the Puppy Place Maggie and Max written by Ellen Miles. I read page 51 through page 57.
ReplyDeleteLizzie wrote a pome about Maggie and Buddy being friends. Buddy loves Maggie what they like to do now is that they sleep and play together. Buddy is older then Maggie so to Maggie Buddy is her older brother. What I will change is that Buddy and Max can be friends.
Tonight I read Amulet written by Kizu Kubishi. I read page 100 through page 120. Emily goes to a resistance and found her brother as the leader. There was a traitor dressed as a resistance fighter but was actually an elf. I would change the elf to a good guy.
ReplyDeleteTonight I read Magic Tree House written by Marry Pope Osborne. I read 1 through 40 pages.
ReplyDeleteIf I was the author Jack and Annie will be grownups. So they can live their life and do what ever they want to do. I still think Jack and Annie will still boss each other around when they are grownups and old. That's my change if I was the Author.
Tonight I read 39 clues, maze of bones written by rick riordan. I read page 127 through page 155
ReplyDeleteafter reading my book, there is one thing I would change. the book is giving all the clues out to everyone that reads it. I would change it to where the book had a lock and only one person had the key. I also read how Dan and Amy got trapped then escaped like I predicted but i would change it so that Dan didn't throw the bomb that knocked out the hots because the hots might have been on their team.
I read the marushin written by?. I read page 30 through page 37
ReplyDeleteOkay what if the guy who got stranded on Mars didn't get stranded on Mars. Then that would be a whole different story. Everybody will be ok and everybody would be happy. Why well because he could be coming home And he could say I survived in a sandstorm with a pole stuck in mine rib. That's why!
Tonight I read __Treasure Hunter_ written by __Patterson_. I read page _ch 59__ through page _ch 66__.
ReplyDeleteThere would be thunder every were josh live in San Diego. There would be lighting striking every were. There is tornados in water. There would be hurricanes every where. There would be lighting every were . There land pirates every were. That is my plot twister.
Tonight I read A Swiftly Tilting Planet written by Madeline L'Engle. I read page 131 through 145. Pastor Mortmain took Zyell to jail. Brandon and Indians saved her. I would change the story so that Pastor Mortmain would be nicer to Zyell.
ReplyDeleteTonight I read Magic Tree House written by Marry Pope Osborne. I read 16 through 22 pages.
ReplyDeleteJack and Annie left the tree house and went to the Red Fort to be ambassadors to find the emerald necklace. If I could change something it would be for Annie. I would want her to wear her hair down and not pretend to be a boy. I think she will get in the fort more easily. Annie will get through the guards more easily.
Tonight I read Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets written by J.K. Rowling. I read page 314 through page 324.
ReplyDeleteHarry was fighting the giant snake in the Chamber of Secrets. Dumbledor's bird Fawkes came and helped. Fawkes ripped out the snakes eyes out. The sorting hat also was there. In the hat was a sword. Harry used it to kill the snake. A tooth from the snake got into Harry's elbow. His elbow was bleeding. Harry killed Tom Riddles diary. That made Ginny alive because Tom Riddle died. One thing I would change is that the snakes tooth did not have to go in Harry's elbow.