1. Check your last blog entry and respond to my reply.
2. Copy and paste the sentences (with blanks) below and post to your reply.
Tonight I read ___ written by ___. I read page ___ through page ___.
3. If there has been any mention of weather in your book describe the weather and tell me
This should be at the top of your response to tonight's RAMS question.
Hit return to start your paragraph.
how you think it has impacted what happens in your story. If weather is not specifically
mentioned, take a reasonable risk and tell me what you think the weather is. Include any information that helped you decide.
5. Use Read & Write Gold to listen to what you have written and correct errors.
- Check that your answers are written in complete sentences.
- Check for capital letters and the correct ending punctuation. (. ! ?)
- Make sure your name has capital letters?
- Click "PUBLISH."
Tonight I read A Swiftly Tilting Planet written by Madeleine L'Engle. I read page 19 through page 28.
ReplyDeleteIn my book, Meg and her family were eating Thanksgiving dinner and suddenly the power went out in the dining room. There was a big thunderstorm with lightning and it made it feel more scary because they were talking about war.
I read Mockingjay written by Suzanne Collins. I read page 269 through page 273
ReplyDeleteThere hasn't really been any talk of weather so I'm just going to tell you what the weather might be. obviously in the Hunger Games it probably wouldn't look very nice outside because it's an intense movie. the probably look very dark not too much of bright skies but I mean some parts of the movie it happy but not usually. that's what is like in The Hunger Games
Great response! Please check the beginning of your sentences to make sure they start with a capital letter. Please add ending punctuation to your last sentence.
DeleteThere hasn't really been any talk of weather. I'm just going to tell you what the weather might be. Obviously in the Hunger Games it probably wouldn't look very nice outside because it's an intense movie. the probably look very dark not too much of bright skies but I mean some parts of the movie it happy but not usually. That's what is like in The Hunger Games.
DeleteI read page 280 to page 293. I read The Hunger Games written by Suzan Collins.
ReplyDeleteWhen Katniss was with her group there was a wether issue. They was poisonous
fog coming from the north of the woods. Some people died.
Thank you for capitalizing the title of your book! Spelling errors: "wether" "they"
Deletejeruney to the sinter of the earth.
ReplyDeletei read to page 53-101
in my book to day i read how the arr presser is doping.
I think the arr presser is going to drop even more.
Good response. Please redo making sure the title of your book is capitalized and you have ending punctuation for each sentence. You also need to capitalize the word "i" even if it is not the beginning of a sentence.
DeleteJourney to the Center of the Earth.
DeleteI read to page 53-101
In my book to day I read how the air pressure is dropping.
I think the arr pressre is going to drop even more.
Tonight I read Magic Tree House Good morning Gorilla. written by Marry Pope Osborne. I read 25 to 47 pages.
ReplyDeleteJack And Annie were having some bad weather. At their house They were having tornados, hail and lightning. They had to stay in a safe place at their house.
So they won't get injured during the bad weather. Jack and Annie were scared about the weather.
Great response, Jamie! Next time, don't hit "return" or "enter" after your sentences so they will post as a paragraph.
DeleteTonight I read __Treasure Hunter_ written by __Patterson_. I read page _ch 59__ through page _ch 60__.
ReplyDeleteThere is thunder were josh live in San Diego. There is lighting striking every were. There is tornados in water. There is hurricanes every where. There is a big blue sky. There is a big bright sun outside like bright like a light.
Did all of this change of weather happen in the two pages you read? Please use R&W Gold to listen to what you wrote and make corrections.
Deletetwo chapters that what ch mean
DeleteTonight I read The Puppy Place Pugsley written by Ellen Miles. I read page 1 through page 10.
ReplyDeletePugsley is a very cute dog. I think that Buddy is starting to like him has a doggy friend. I don’t think that Buddy does not like when a lot of his dog’s friends is going somewhere else. It makes him feel sad that he does not have that munch doggy friends now I can’t really do this question I am sorry
Use R&W Gold to listen to your post. Your second sentence does not make sense. Your use of the word "munch" in the third sentence does not make sense. Instead of apologizing for not answering the question as part of your paragraph it would be better to include that information in your paragraph, for example, "There was no mention of the weather but I think it must have been nice because the dogs were all going outside." Please redo making corrections I have identified.
DeleteTonight I read The Puppy Place Pugsley written by Ellen Miles. I read page 1 through page 10.
DeletePugsley is a very cute dog. I think that Buddy is starting to like Pugsly has a doggy friend. I don’t think that Buddy does not like when a lot of his dog’s friends is going somewhere else. It makes him feel sad that he does not have that much doggy friends now I did not really here in the parts that I read talking about the weather. I think it was nice out because there were dogs playing outside.
Tonight I read Magic Tree House written by Mary Pope Osborne . I read page 53 through page 63.
ReplyDeleteJack and Annie are in England in the Victorian era. The weather was rainy and it was a dirty rain from the coal burning in the houses. We know this because in the book it says, "They walked through the smothering coal smoke and grimy rain." They were looking Charles Dickens and they found him.
Excellent response!
DeleteTonight I read The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe written by C.S. Lewis. I read for 30 minutes.
ReplyDeleteIt is a rainy day in England when Lucy discovers the magic in the wardrobe. Then when she discovers she is in Narnia it is snowing. The White Witch is cold and is always in the snow. Aslan is in spring and warm weather.
Great! I don't really understand your last sentence if you can rewrite it. Is Asian a person or are you talking about the continent?
DeleteIt is a rainy day in England when Lucy discovers the magic in the wardrobe. Then when she discovers she is in Narnia it is snowing. The White Witch is cold and is always in the snow. Aslan is in spring and warm weather.
DeleteAslan is a lion and a character in my book. When Aslan is around the weather is always warm and sunny. When the white witch is around it is cold and snowy.
It is a rainy day in England when Lucy discovers the magic in the wardrobe. Then when she discovers she is in Narnia it is snowing. The White Witch is cold and is always in the snow. Aslan is in spring and warm weather.
DeleteAslan is a lion and a character in my book. When Aslan is around the weather is always warm and sunny. When the white witch is around it is cold and snowy.
Tonight I read Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets written by J.K. Rowling. I read page 170 through page 182.
ReplyDeleteIt is I think right after Halloween. It is a little cold. It does not say what the weather is like there. It is probably a little cold because it is fall.
I read page 280 to page 293. I read The Hunger Games written by Suzan Collins.
ReplyDeleteWhen Katniss was with her group there was a wether issue. their was poisonous
fog coming from the north of the woods. Some people died.