Thursday, September 5, 2013

Thursday 9/05: Changing a character

1. Title:
2. What page number did you start on?___ What page number did you end with?___
3. Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
4. Your name :-)
5. What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?

9 comments:

  1. Hunger Games
    Page 169-174
    If I had to change one or two things about Katniss, she would be an archery prodigy and she would be a hunting expert. She would be an archery prodigy because she then she could shoot an arrow about 1,000 feet from anywhere she’s standing. She would also be a hunting expert because then she could get more food for her family and she could spend more time in the woods.
    -Kate

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  2. Spy School Pg 188-195
    I woued ching his name to Lavell. It sounds like a cool name. I would chins size. I would make him small. He would fit in small spaces.

    Cody

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  3. SWISS FAMILY ROBINSON

    Page 350 to page 358

    Two things I would wish to change about fritz is him and his family stuck on a island for more than a year. the last thing I would change about him is for him not to go away so he can be with his family.

    by Lucas

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  4. sharpshooter
    page 132-140

    If i can two things i would change is that the have the barrette. Have more some granges for a gun. Allow him to more bullets. Have some food for survive.

    Theo

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  5. Jack
    The Graveyard Book
    First Page:94
    Last Page:113

    I would change Bod to a mean person. That him leave the graveyard some times. Let him go to school some times. Let him have a lot of friends.

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  6. Al Capone Shines My Shoes 186-202
    One thing I would change about Moose would be the way he handles some situations. Instead of going with what the adult says about his sister, I would have him stand up for her. Another thing I would change would be how he sometimes treats his friends. Sometimes he is a bit mean to them, I would make him a bit nicer.
    Ike

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  7. Percy Jackson and The Olympians: The Lightning Thief (Book One)
    Started: 127 - Ended: 148
    If I could change 1, 2 or 3 things about Percy it would be.....
    1. He wouldn't get in trouble a lot at school. This is his 6th year of school at 6 different schools.
    2. I would also change him to not lie sometimes because he does it sometimes and lying isn't nice.
    3. Since he is at Half-Blood camp and his sword was at his camp councilor's chest and he was like "Sorry." But he didn't know but if you did know I wouldn't want him to say that because camp doesn't really say that I guess.
    Sarah

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  8. Emma
    To kill a mocking bird
    Page:34

    I would probably change the main character so she was more innocent.
    I would change her father so he was more involved in her life.
    I would change her school so she was in a advanced class.
    I would change that everyone was so afraid of one of the characters.
    I would change that her friend left.

    Emma

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  9. This book is not good for you
    Page 1-46
    I would change Max Ernest's talkativeness just a little. This is because it can be a little annoying and pointless sometimes. Also, I would change Cass's (adopted) Mom's not caring about her finding her birth parents. I think she would care.
    -Max

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