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In the book, The Black Stallion, the ship gets caught in a storm and the horse escapes. If I
rewrote the plot I would have the horse get stolen from a train car. The main reason I would
make this change is that it seems mean to put a horse on a ship. How could a horse like being on a ship when he is so used to having his hoofs on solid ground? No wonder the horse wanted to escape.
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Tonight I read Redwall, Pearls of Lura written by Brian Jacques.I read page 1 through page 24.
ReplyDeleteGrath got put in prison for disrespecting the King by saying he was not royal. I would have changed it so that Grath showed him respect even though he didn't because Grath seemed like a cool guy
Please correct by checking for ending punctuation for each sentence.
DeleteI read page 229 to page 243. I read the hunger games written by Suzan Collins.
ReplyDeleteKatniss sister was elected for the hunger games; Katniss volunteered as tribute.
I would change Katniss volunteering as tribute. I would make her sister volunteer.
It would make the story more interesting.
Capitalization error: Book name
DeleteIn the first sentence, Katniss should have a possessive apostrophe (') after her name. (Whose sister? Kattniss' sister)
I read page 229 to page 243. I read the hunger games written by Suzan Collins.
ReplyDeleteKatniss sister was elected for the hunger games; Katniss volunteered as tribute.
I would change Katniss volunteering as tribute. I would make her sister volunteer.
It would make the story more interesting.
I read page 229 to page 243. I read the hunger games written by Suzan Collins.
ReplyDeleteKatniss sister was elected for the hunger games; Katniss volunteered as tribute.
I would change Katniss volunteering as tribute. I would make her sister volunteer.
It would make the story more interesting.
Tonight I read The Puppy Place Patches written by Ellen Miles. I read page 16 through page 22
ReplyDeleteScout went to the same place that Snowball been too. Buddy is getting to like Patches. Buddy is a crazy dog and so is Patches. What I could change in this book is that Buddy and Scout and Patches can be best friends. Why I wanted to change this in my book is because Buddy can have more friends to play with.
Great response! Please check for ending punctuation for sentence stating how many pages you read.
DeleteTonight I read The Puppy Place Patches written by Ellen Miles. I read page 16 through page 22.
DeleteScout went to the same place that Snowball been too. Buddy is getting to like Patches. Buddy is a crazy dog and so is Patches. What I could change in this book is that Buddy and Scout and Patches can be best friends. Why I wanted to change this in my book is because Buddy can have more friends to play with.
Tonight I read Magic Tree House written by Marry Pope Osborne. I read 100 to 150 pages.
ReplyDeleteIn the book, Magic Tree House the teleport was not working. It was raining really hard the rain went to the electricity. And made the teleport to stop.
Please reread directions. Include something that happened. Please use R&W Gold to listen to your entry. Your last two sentences need corrections.
DeleteAlso, sentences should not begin with the word "and" because and is a connector word.
Tonight I read A wind in the Door written by Madeline L'Engle. I read page 149 through page 154. In the story the Ecthroi are making Charles Wallace sick. I would change the Ecthroi to not make Charles Wallace sick. The Ecthroi would bother another planet.
ReplyDeleteI read Mockingjay written by Suzanne Collins. I read page 236 through page 239
ReplyDeleteI Would probably change the part when. Center of the second Hunger Games I mean why couldn't they just make it where she doesn't break the dome on the top and she just through the whole game with Peter again.I mean it'll be more intense and awesome. That's what I would Change book a little.
Sterling, you consistently forget to put a period ( . ) after the sentence that tells the number of pages you read.
DeletePlease check for and correct capitalization errors in the middle of your sentences.
Tonight I read Wonder written by Palincio. I read pages 80 through page 90.
ReplyDeleteAugust's dog Daisy died because she was really old. August was really sad. If I could change a part of the book I would change that Daisy does not get old and die. August would be happy because he is really close to Daisy.
Tonight I read Football Hero written by Tim Green. I read page 229 through page 235.
ReplyDeleteIn this book, Thane and Ty got in trouble with the FBI. Ty has been giving information to Uncle Gus about the Jet's players. Uncle Gus is betting on the team. I would change the part that Uncle Gus was such a bad person and so greedy. I want Uncle Gus to be a good Uncle so Ty can have a nice family.
Tonight I read _Treasure Hunter__ written by _Patterson__. I read page _ch 54__ through page _55__.
ReplyDeleteThe plot was that Josh and his sister could not get out of the water. Josh and his sister landed on a small island with a meager amount of food on the island. Josh and his sister had phones with them but no signal. The helicopter pass through but saw no one.
Solomon, this is a good entry but you didn't tell me what you would change. Please make that correction.
DeleteTonight I read Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets written by J.K. Rowling. I read page 94 through page 102.
ReplyDeleteIn the book Harry Potter Harry is talking to Ron and Colin. Colin wants to take a picture of Harry because he is famous and he wants him to sign it. Malfoy Crab and Goyle come and start bullying Ron and Harry. He tells Ron that a photo of Harry would be worth more than his family's whole house. If I could change that part I would not have Malfoy Crab and Goyle not be there because they are really mean to them.
Tonight I read The Dagger Quick written by Brain Eames. I read page 45 through page 56.
ReplyDeleteKitto is going to go to his old house. The main deal is that if van in not a traitor then who is? Kitto finds out that his family used to be the most powerful family in the world.
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