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Highlight the blanks and type in your answers to complete the sentence.
This should be at the top of your response to tonight's RAMS' question.
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- Check that your answers are written in complete sentences.
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ReplyDeleteSuper job! Please edit to put a period ( . ) after the name of the author.
DeleteTonight I read A Wind in the Door written by Madeleine L'Engle. I read page 15 through page 25. Charles Wallace would look up what mitochondria are. He would try and take pictures of snowflakes in the air to see what shape they are. He is interested in science. He would look out the window at the snow falling.
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ReplyDeleteTonight I read A Wind in the Door written by Madeleine L'Engle. I read page 15 through page 25. Charles Wallace would look up what mitochondria are. He would try and take pictures of snowflakes in the air to see what shape they are. He is interested in science. He would look out the window at the snow falling.
DeleteTonight I read The Puppy Place Flash written by Ellen Miles I read page 10 through page 20
ReplyDeleteFlash is vary good with Buddy. The kids’ loves do play with Buddy and Flash. Flash is 1 and Buddy is 2 they love to hangout together. The kids think they like to hangout together. Buddy and Flash would like to play in the snow together. They would have a snowball fight and run around the big snowman that Charles and Lizzie made. Elizabeth
Great job, Elizabeth! Thank you for changing the setting to capitalize your name. Please make the following edits:
Delete1. In your first sentence, "Tonight..." please put a period ( . ) after the name of the author.
2. When you write numbers less than ten within text you need to spell them instead of just typing the number. For example, "Flash is one and Buddy is two...." also you need to add "years old" so it is clear to your reader that you are not talking about size, shape, etc."
3. "Flash is 1 and Buddy is 2 they love to hangout together." is actually two sentences. Can you figure out where to put a period?
4. Please remove your name from the end of the paragraph.
Tonight I read The Puppy Place Flash written by Ellen Miles. I read page 10 through page 20
DeleteFlash is vary good with Buddy. The kids’ loves do play with Buddy and Flash. Flash is one and Buddy is two years old.They love to hangout together. The kids think they like to hangout together. Buddy and Flash would like to play in the snow together. They would have a snowball fight and run around the big snowman that Charles and Lizzie made.
Copy and paste the sentences (with blanks) below to post to your reply.
ReplyDeleteHighlight the blanks and type in your answers to complete the sentence.
This should be at the top of your response to tonight's RAMS' question.
Tonight I read Mocking jay. I read page 54 through page 68.
2. Write an interesting paragraph to share what you think your character would do if they had a "snow day" and didn't have to go to school or work.
Katniss and her friends would do a lot of stuff in the snow. They would make a snowman and Also have snowball fights. One of the best things to do is to slide down a hill with sled’s that go fast. I want to do all those things but Katniss really Can't because in the book they had schedules and they would be punished if they came late. They would still be able to sneak out and play in the snow.
Great job! Please make the following edits:
Delete1. The word "jay" in the title of your book should be capitalized.
2. The word "Also" in your 2nd sentence should NOT be capitalized.
3. The word "Can't" in your 4th sentence should NOT be capitalized.
4. I understand why you copy and paste the directions, but please delete them before publishing.
Today I read Magic Tree House by Marry Pope Osborne I read 26 to54
ReplyDeleteI would play in the snow with jack because he is cool. Then I would do some snowflakes with him. And a snowball fight with him
Please make the following corrections:
Delete1. In the sentence beginning, "Today I read..." put a period after the last name of your author.
2. You have no ending punctuation for the number of pages you read.
3. You did not capitalize the name of the person in your first sentence.
3. You need edit your work to make it a paragraph.
TOPIC sentence (Remember to indent your paragraph.)
+ 2-3 DETAIL sentences
+ WRAP UP (conclusion) sentence
Note: Do not begin a sentence with the word "And."
Every sentence begins with a capital letter and ends with a stop.
"Today I read Magic Tree House by Marry Pope Osborne. I read 26 to 50.
DeleteI would play in the snow with Jack because he is cool. Then I would do some snowflakes with him. I would play a snowball fight with him.
Tonight I read Harry Potter written by J.K. Rowling. I read page 201 through page 208.
ReplyDeleteIt snows at Hogwarts every year. The teachers and students sleep at Hogwarts so they wont have to leave.They still have to go to classes. I think Harry would have a snowball fight with his friends.
Tonight I read The hunger games written by suzan Collins. I read page 15 through pages. If Katniss had snow day she would not because she lives in a house with no ac. She would be freezing.
ReplyDeleteJack, please make the following corrections:
Delete1. Capitalization errors: Title of book and author's name.
2. I read page 15 through pages. <<< This does not make sense? What
was the page number of the last page you read?
3. The sentences you wrote to answer the question do not make sense,
which makes me think you did not use Read & Write Gold to listen to
what you wrote before you published it.
3. You need edit your work to make it a paragraph.
TOPIC sentence (Remember to indent your paragraph.)
+ 2-3 DETAIL sentences
+ WRAP UP (conclusion) sentence
Tonight I read The Dagger Quick written by Brian Eames. I read page 1 through page 23. Kitto saw it snowing outside, so he did not have to go to school. Instead, he went to go play in the snow with his friends. He and his friends were happy to finally have snow. They threw snow balls at each other and adults, then ran and hid so the adults were confused. Exhausted and cold, Kitto and his friends went inside to have some hot chocolate. It was an awesome snow day!
ReplyDeleteTonight I read Magic Tree House Tonight on the Titanic written by Mary Pope Osborne. I read page 1 through page 14. I think Jack would enjoy the snow day because he would not have to go to school. He would play in the snow with Annie. They would make snow angels, snow man and have a snowball fight. They could go in the magic treehouse and take a trip to the North Pole. They would go on a mission for Morgan. They will have a great time in the snow on their snow day.
ReplyDeleteTonight I read Julia Child written by Geoff and Carlene.
ReplyDeleteI read page 16 through page 25.
If where she lived was snowy and she did not have to go to work, Julia would play in the snow. She would enjoy making snow balls. She would probably make a homemade cup of hot chocolate when she came inside.
Tonight I read The hunger games written by suzan Collins. I read 15 pages. If Katniss had snow day she would not be happy, because she lives in a house with no AC. She would be freezing to death.
ReplyDeleteCopy and paste the sentences (with blanks) below to post to your reply.
ReplyDeleteHighlight the blanks and type in your answers to complete the sentence.
This should be at the top of your response to tonight's RAMS' question.
Tonight I read mockingjay. I read page 54 through page 68.
2. Write an interesting paragraph to share what you think your character would do if they had a "snow day" and didn't have to go to school or work.
Katniss and her friends would do a lot of stuff in the snow. They would make a snowman and have snowball fights. One of the best things to do is to slide down a hill with sled’s that go fast. I want to do all those things but Katniss really because in the book they had schedules and they would be punished if they came late. They would still be able to sneak out and play in the snow.
Tonight I read The hunger games written by suzan Collins. I read 15 pages. If Katniss had snow day she would not be happy, because she lives in a house with no AC. She would be freezing to death.
ReplyDeleteThe name of your author is not properly capitalized. You do not need a comma before the word "because.
DeleteYou still did not write a paragraph --you wrote two sentences.
Try starting with this.
Topic Sentence:
Katniss would not be happy if she had a snow day because she lives in a house with no heating.
Add three detail sentences:
1.
2.
3.
Conclusion:
I'm worried Katniss would freeze to death in a blizzard.
Tonight I read deadly waters written by Alane Ferguson, I read page 115 through page 151.
ReplyDeleteThe book I liked the best was the first book I read which was Artemis fowl. The mania reason I liked it was because it made me think and wonder. The book was a cliffhanger because you never knew what was going to happen next. I like reading books like that because they leave you with a mystery.
Tonight I read A Wind in the Door written by Madeline L'Engle. I read page 33 through page 50. Meg, Calvin and Charles Wallace went into the field.
ReplyDeleteThey met the dragon and his teacher.
Tonight I read Popcorn days and buttermilk nights written by Gary Paulsen I read page 1 through page 16.
ReplyDeleteIn my book today I read about Carley. A kid who had gotten in trouble and was sent to his uncle's farm in Minnesota. For the summer he gets off the bus and is looking for his uncle who is supposed to pick him up. When he is waiting for his uncle he goes to the blacksmith who is making horse shoes. The weird thing about the blacksmith is that the blacksmith knows who Carley is and Carley. Doesn't know who the blacksmith is until the blacksmith tells Carley that he's Carley's uncle so after a day of helping uncle David in the blacksmith shop. They finally head home to David's farm.