Monday, November 2, 2015

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2. I read from page       to page      .
3. Write 3-4 grammatically correct sentences to respond to the following question: Pretend you are the main character in your book and write a journal or diary entry. Think about what thoughts your character is having or what feelings they may be experiencing.

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  1. 2. Title : The Puppy Place
    3. I read from page 47 to page 50 .



    Charles and Lizzie are really not happy. They want to keep Goldey and they do want to give her to another family. I hope that they can keep their dog. Elizabeth

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  5. Magic Tree house
    I read 15 to 20

    I would hate being in the story because. I would not know what to do and I will be bored. And I will be scared.

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  6. 1. Title: Artemis Fowl and the Opal Diception
    2. I read from page 45 to page 65.
    3. Write 3-4 grammatically correct sentences to respond to the following question: Pretend you are the main character in your book and write a journal or diary entry. Think about what thoughts your character is having or what feelings they may be experiencing.

    I would not like to be in the story because it would be in this particular story that I would most likely die. It would be scary to see dead people. The food would taste terrible. And I would die.
    :) :)

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  7. From The Mixed Up Files of Mrs Basile E. Frankweiler
    120-131
    I am Jamie. Our parents are really worried. I wonder what's going to happen us when we get home. I think I might get in trouble with our parents. They are going to be happy to see and mad we ran away.

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  8. 1. I Survived the Attacks of September 11, 2001
    2. I read from page 56 to page 72.
    3. I am Lucas and I am stuck in this grimy store were I am hiding as part of the World Trade Center came crashing down in Manhattan. I am feeling terrified and nervous because I do not know if the world is ending. I am experiencing disgusting dust in my mouth and throat.

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  9. Henry and Mudge
    The whole book
    I found a cat at my front door. I looked all over the city for the owner but I could not find him. I went home and watched TV. A cop came by my house a saw the cat. He was so happy to see Dave his cat. What a great day!

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  10. 1. Title: Treasure Hunters
    2. I read from page 300 to page 350 .
    If I was main character.I would have sad feeling.
    I would have a funny feeling.

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  11. WHO WAS SUSAN B ANTHONY
    If my main character have feeling. She will feel happy, sad and mad.
    Her thought will be having a puppy.
    Her though will be having a baby sister.

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  12. I think he is espereensing felling. I'm not surer whit is going on. There are so things that are prite sade.

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  13. Title: Magic Tree House 38 Monday With A Mad Genius
    I read from page 3 to page 30
    I think they are happy they found Leonard Da Vinchi. They are worried for there mishon. They are trying to figure out there mishon.

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