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Thursday, October 15, 2015
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i read The Lightning Thief
ReplyDeletei read 30 pages
I think percy reminds me of the wave in the ocean. Because he is nice and remind me of it. And i think he is kind.
Correct the first sentence by capitalizing the proper noun. Please rewrite your 2nd and 3rd sentence so they do not start with "because" or "and." Check your ENTIRE entry to correct the word "i" by capitalizing it.
Delete1. Title: The Puppy Place Goldie
ReplyDelete2. How many pages did you read today? 6
At 7:00 Am there dad came home with a puppy. They were so excited to get a dog because they wanted one for a vary long time. The kids wanted to find a name for their new dog. They named the dog Goldie. They both liked the name that they picked out for the dog.
Elizabeth
Please check your use of the homonym "there" in the first sentence.
DeleteLion Dance
ReplyDelete10
I picture people dance in the street of new York city.
I hear loud sound of crowd.
People give kids money for lucky.
Maxine, Please use R&W Gold to listen to your sentences and make necessary corrections.
DeleteTitle: Magic Tree House 35 Night of the new magicians
ReplyDelete3 chapters
When the Magic tree house was spinning i herd wind noises. I herd people talking at the fair in Paris. And i herd the train conductor talking.
Alex, please use R&W Gold to listen to your sentences and make necessary corrections.
Delete1 I Survived the Joplin Tornado, 2011
ReplyDelete2 I read 18 pages
3 When the monster tornado was coming, I heard the fast wind moving towards Dr. Gage like a humming sound. When the scary tornado warning sound came on , I imagined it ringing loud. I would have decided to run into a room in the basement with no glass windows. I can see Dr. Gage hiding under a huge tree holding on for his life so he wouldn't die like the 330 people did.
1 I Survived the Joplin Tornado, 2011
Delete2 I read 18 pages
3 When the monster tornado was coming, I heard the fast wind moving towards Dr. Gage like a humming sound. When the scary tornado warning sound came on, I imagined it ringing loud. I would have decided to run into a room in the basement with no glass windows. I can see Dr. Gage hiding under a huge tree holding on for his life so he wouldn't die like the 330 people did.
1 I Survived the Joplin Tornado, 2011
Delete2 I read 18 pages
3 When the monster tornado was coming, I heard the fast wind moving towards Dr. Gage like a humming sound. When the scary tornado warning sound came on, I imagined it ringing loud. I would have decided to run into a room in the basement with no glass windows. I can see Dr. Gage hiding under a huge tree holding on for his life so he wouldn't die like the 330 people did.
Fall of the Spirit Animals
ReplyDelete5 pages
What I pictured today when I was reading was a courtyard with a gorilla sitting on the ground in chains. He looked grumpy and mean. Then I pictured Kovo drawing on paper with charcoal. He was drawing a jaw which represented a door.
1. Title: Encyclopedia brown
ReplyDelete2. How many pages did you read today? One whole chapter pages25-33
3. Use words to describe pictures and/or sounds you made in your mind to help you understand the pages you read. Write your descriptions in complete sentences. Example: When I was reading the part about the storm I made a picture in my mind about the ship rocking back and forth and waves crashing.
When we read about Bug's being trapped in the dark room I made a picture in my mind of our storage room in the basement.
4. Write 3-4 grammatically correct sentences.
In this story, Encyclopedia Brown is the good guy that solves the cases. Bugs accused Encyclopedia Brown of kidnapping. Encyclopedia Brown said to the police man that it was a lie.
Manuel, please check your title to correctly capitalize the second word. Also, you do not have to write 3-4 additional sentences for 4. Instead, 4. is asking you to write 3-4 grammatically correct sentences to answer 3. See me if my explanation doesn't make sense.
DeleteMs. Back wailer F. E Firank wlie
ReplyDelete25pages
"Well, they weren't lost in taxis. They were lost track of."
"What kind of a sentence is that? Lost track of?"
"Oh, boloney! There are whole long books about the lost works of Michelangelo. Picture works and sculptor works that people lost track of."
Claudia softened. "Is the little angel one of them?"
"What's the difference between an angel and a cupid?" Jamie inquired.
"Why?" Claudia asked.
"Because there's a lost cupid for sure."
"Angels wear clothes and wings and are Christian. Cupids wear bows and arrows; they are naked and pagan."
"What's pagan?" Jamie asked. "Boy or girl?"
"How would I know?" Claudia answered.
"You said they are naked."
"Well, pagan has nothing to do with that. It means worshipping idols instead of God."
"Oh," Jamie nodded. "The statue in the museum is an angel. It's dressed in its altogether. I don't know yet if an angel was lost ..." Then he glanced over at his sister and muttered, "track of."
Claudia had begun her research confident that a morning's study would make her completely an expert; but Michelangelo had humbled her, and humility was not an emotion with which she felt comfortable; she was irritable. Jamie ended his research
Emma, your entry does not ask the question asked, which is: Use words to describe pictures and/or sounds you made in your mind to help you understand the pages you read. Please answer the question using 3-4 grammatically correct sentences.
Delete1. Title: Treasure Hunters
ReplyDelete2. How many pages did you read today? 235 pages
3. Use words to describe pictures and/or sounds you made in your mind to help you understand the pages you read. Write your descriptions in complete sentences. Example: When I was reading the part about the storm I made a picture in my mind about the ship rocking back and forth and waves crashing.4. Write 3-4 grammatically correct sentences. They would not die from the waves.They would have a stronger boat.They would live.
Are you on finish reading page 235 or did you read 235 pages. The question to answer was: "Use words to describe pictures and/or sounds you made in your mind to help you understand the pages you read." You answer is a prediction. Please correct by answering the question.
Delete1. Title: MAGNUS CHASE and the GODS of ASGARD
ReplyDelete2. How many pages did you read today? 2 chapters
3. Use words to describe pictures and/or sounds you made in your mind to help you understand the pages you read. Write your descriptions in complete sentences. Example: When I was reading the part about the storm I made a picture in my mind about the ship rocking back and forth and waves crashing. The picture I made was Magnus Chase Standing on top of Surt. I also pictured he would have a great feast with Odin the All father. Then Happy Ever After!!!!
Check your first sentence for a capitalization error and rewrite in your reply. Also, "Then Happy Ever After!!!!" is not a sentence and does not answer the question, instead, it is a prediction.
DeleteFrom The Mixed Up Files of Mrs Basil E. Frankweiler
ReplyDeleteI heard tinkering. The Angel was white and gray. She is an angel with wings. She is holding a harp.
From The Mixed Up Files of Mrs Basil E. Frankweiler
ReplyDeleteI heard tinkering. The Angel was white and gray. She is an angel with wings. She is holding a harp.