Thursday, February 12, 2015

Thursday 2/12: Changing your character

  • Title:
  • What page number did you start on?___ What page number did you end with?___
  • Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
  • Your name :-)
  • What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?
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  1. Title: how to be a pirate
    What page number did you start on?___ What page number did you end with?___
    Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
    Your name :-)Sterling
    What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?

    I would change hiccup to be big and tall. I would change how the story ends. I would change the story to have more action. I would change how the story begins.

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  2. I read Diary of a Wimpy Kid. The first thing I would to change the main character, would be to change his attitude, so he can be confident in himself. The second thing I would change, is for him to stand up to his older brother Rodrick. Lastly, I would change his creativity. I think without creativity, you can't have good friends. Jack A

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  3. Title:Ben Pratt and Keepers of the School We Hold these truths
    What page number did you start on?11 What page number did you end with?21
    Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
    Your name :-) Louie
    What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?For Robert I would change him to be super nice like Ben. Another change on Robert would be to be less braggy about things. I would change that his parents would not have died. I would not change how smart he is.

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  4. Title:Ben Pratt and Keepers of the School We Hold these truths
    What page number did you start on?11 What page number did you end with?21
    Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
    Your name :-) Louie
    What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?For Robert I would change him to be super nice like Ben. Another change on Robert would be to be less braggy about things. I would change that his parents would not have died. I would not change how smart he is.

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  5. Title:
    What page number did you start on?___ What page number did you end with?___
    Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
    Your name :-)
    What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?
    [Start here]

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  6. The Secret of the Old Clock I started on page 220 through 230. Nancy wanted to her friend's house to have a sleepover. She loves to have sleepovers that is her favorite thing. She likes playing with her friends.She likes to play board games and games with her friends. Nancy will be a little kid, she will be twelve years old, and she will see her mom more. Winter O'Brien

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  7. Title:The Battle of The Labyrinth.
    What page number did you start on? 31 What page number did you end with? 49
    Remember to capitalize as you write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences. Rachel is clueless. Annebeth thinks Percy loves Rachel. Where is Nico? How is Tyson?.
    Your name :-)Aidan Hatfield Ω
    What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book?I would change stuff about Rachel.
    first I would make her a demigod.
    Then I would make her less scared.
    and last but not least I would make her immortal.

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  8. The secret of the old clock I started on page 230 through 240. Nancy likes to go to her friend's house over the weekend. She loves to play games and have pizza for dinner at her friend's house. She loves to stay up late for sleepovers. Nancy loves to play with her friends at their houses. Nancy will thirteen and she likes to play at the park. Winter O'Brien

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