Thursday, April 4, 2013
Thursday 4/4: Plot twist...
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3. If you were to re-write this book, what would you change about the plot (the flow of action) and why? For example: in The Black Stallion, the ship he on is caught in a storm and he escapes. If I were to re-write it, I might have him stolen off of a train instead, because I think it's mean to have a horse on a ship.
4. Write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
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Spoiled
ReplyDeleteI would change that Molly's mom dies. i would have just like her to tell her that her dad is a famous guy. But it would affect the whole book. They would not do the part about her mom dieing in a terrible place when that is not true. Molly gets really mad so she agrees to go out in public.
Artemis Fowl: The Arctic Incident
ReplyDeletePage: 243
Artemis has to crawl through a pipe filled with plasma gel and he has to get out as quickly as he can just in case the DNA cannons are activated and the plasma gel is activated sending a plasma charge through the pipe. I would change this. What I would change about it is that Artemis has to go though a pipe that is just clear, except for radiation, and he has to get out as quickly as he can just in case the DNA cannons are activated and the plasma is sent through the pipe. In both mine and the original version, Artemis has to wash off with Anti-Rad Foam.
-Kululu
A Trip, A Tryst and Terror
ReplyDeletePage: 46
If I were to re-write this book, I would have Maggy the dog be a young puppy. She is an old lab and I think it would be more fun for Anna and Davy if they would get to play with her as a puppy. Puppies are cute and adorable and do funny things like slip around. The plot would be different because they would have adventures with her if she was younger. Right now she can only just walk to the chicken coop.Woof, Woof!
-Kate
The Mystery in NYC
ReplyDeletePage 21
If I were to re-write this book, I would make then go to LA. They went to NYC in a jet, I would make ride a rocket to LA. I would make the book more non fiction than Mystery because I like non fiction book. They see the president and famous people. I wonder how that book would turn out.
Gabriel
Wild Life Pg 145
ReplyDeleteI would probably change the beginning. I would not send him to his grandparents. He probably could just stay in the same city with his friends. That would make him happier if he doesn’t have to go to his grandparent’s house. He could camp out at home maybe. He wouldn’t run away.
Cody
If You're Reading This, It's Too Late
ReplyDeletePage 176
If I were to re-write this book... I wouldn't have to change the book, I would have to change the author. The story is fine and so is the author but there is more changes to the author. He is so mystery and goes by Pseudonymous Bosch. He doesn't want to share his real name just incase people do not like his books. His real name is Raphael Simon. That is all we know and he hates pictures because he is like a mystery man.
stick dog
ReplyDeletep. 122
If I were to re-write this book. I would put in hamburger land. It would have meat all over the land. That would be cool i would like it.
Theo luxemburger
H2O: dark nights with her
ReplyDeletepg. 30
If i were to re-write this book. I would change having Chorlette. She is mean and a boyfriend stiller. I would also change when she took Cleo's necklace and said it was her's.
Molly Moon 2
ReplyDeleteReese pg. 30
I think that if i could re-write this story, i would make Molly a little bit smarter and make better decisions. That would help her not to rob banks to save her dogs.
Reese
The Memoires of a Geisha
ReplyDeletepg.300
If I had to re-write the book, I would change the war. I would have wished the war away so that I could continue reading about the enteresting gossipness of a Geisha. I really like this book and the way it is, though. I can accept how it goes, especially because it is true to life.
--Ava