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3. What are two or three things you would change about a character in your book? 4. Write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences. (brought to you by Taylor)
Artemis Fowl Page: 248 I would change three things about Holly Short. I would make her not THE first girl in LEPrecon, but ONE of the first girls in LEPrecon. I would also make her act little nicer to citizens. Another thing I would change about her would be her attitude towards humans. I would make her feel less angry with them. -Kululu (Max)
If I had to change something they would not have they same kind of book. I would change all of there sickness. The book would be totally different. Hazel would have gone to school for the last 3 years and made friends. She would have never been in the Support Group. Gus would have never have gotten sick and lost his leg. It would be an ok book but average.
If I had two or three thing to change about a character that would be Max-Ernest. 1. Talk at the perfect (100%) time 2. Get really creative with ideas. 3. Help Cassandra and Yo-Yoji if they need any help at all. Max-Ernest is a great kid and would this is what I would change about him. (:
Wild Life Pg 55 I would change Erik's hair color from black to blond. He would be like me. I would probably have Erik live at a hotel. He would not be stuck in that house with only three channels. He would have a dinosaur as a pet instead of a dog. That would keep Erik safe. Cody
Nim’s island Page 29 I don’t really think I would change anything about my character Nim. Nim is exactly what I expected. She is brave, she saved her island, and she can swing a machete. Nim has caring friends that are animals. I suppose if I hand to change my character Nim the changes would be her hair, her clothes, and her scar. - Kate
Ttfn 230 It would make the book a lot more better if they had som scenes when they met in person. Also there is a lot of action. There is another thing to make the book better. It is to carry on conversations.
I would change sturing because so he is nice to the raccoon. He would put him i the tree because he would like to see out side. I would like to put rascl on a leach. I would put racle in his bedroom.
I would change the setting. I know that's the whole part of the book but I don't like the setting. They should be like in a place call Magical island of life. I would change the time zone like not back in the old days but in 21st century. There should be IPhones, and smart phones, and IPods. I would also change the color not black and white but color.
Like a Maccabee Page 84 I would change two thing about Mandy. I would change the way she acts because she is mean to Ben. I would change that she is not spoiled. If this happened, I wonder how Ben would acted. Gabe
I would change The fact that Linda moved to England. I would aslo change the fact that Zoe missed Linda. Another thing I would change would be that Zoe feels so bad for eating cake a lot. Finally, I would change how bad Linda's grades are.
Artemis Fowl
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I would change three things about Holly Short. I would make her not THE first girl in LEPrecon, but ONE of the first girls in LEPrecon. I would also make her act little nicer to citizens. Another thing I would change about her would be her attitude towards humans. I would make her feel less angry with them.
-Kululu
(Max)
The fault in our stars
ReplyDeleteIf I had to change something they would not have they same kind of book. I would change all of there sickness. The book would be totally different. Hazel would have gone to school for the last 3 years and made friends. She would have never been in the Support Group. Gus would have never have gotten sick and lost his leg. It would be an ok book but average.
If You're Reading This, It's Too Late
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If I had two or three thing to change about a character that would be Max-Ernest. 1. Talk at the perfect (100%) time 2. Get really creative with ideas. 3. Help Cassandra and Yo-Yoji if they need any help at all. Max-Ernest is a great kid and would this is what I would change about him. (:
Wild Life Pg 55
ReplyDeleteI would change Erik's hair color from black to blond. He would be like me. I would probably have Erik live at a hotel. He would not be stuck in that house with only three channels. He would have a dinosaur as a pet instead of a dog. That would keep Erik safe.
Cody
Nim’s island
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I don’t really think I would change anything about my character Nim. Nim is exactly what I expected. She is brave, she saved her island, and she can swing a machete. Nim has caring friends that are animals. I suppose if I hand to change my character Nim the changes would be her hair, her clothes, and her scar.
- Kate
Ttfn
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It would make the book a lot more better if they had som scenes when they met in person. Also there is a lot of action. There is another thing to make the book better. It is to carry on conversations.
Tali
Rascl
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I would change sturing because so he is nice to the raccoon. He would put him i the tree because he would like to see out side. I would like to put rascl on a leach. I would put racle in his bedroom.
Lincoln
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Well I would change his fighting ways. He has to stop fighting. If he did Lincoln wouldn't been killed. But that is me.David
The wizard of oz
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I would change the setting. I know that's the whole part of the book but I don't like the setting. They should be like in a place call Magical island of life. I would change the time zone like not back in the old days but in 21st century. There should be IPhones, and smart phones, and IPods. I would also change the color not black and white but color.
Like a Maccabee
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I would change two thing about Mandy. I would change the way she acts because she is mean to Ben. I would change that she is not spoiled. If this happened, I wonder how Ben would acted.
Gabe
The Populatiry Papers
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I would change The fact that Linda moved to England. I would aslo change the fact that Zoe missed Linda. Another thing I would change would be that Zoe feels so bad for eating cake a lot. Finally, I would change how bad Linda's grades are.
-Ava