If you could add a character to your book, describe the character and why you would choose to add him/her/it. Write 4-5 grammatically correct sentences.
i would add me. 1. I am a good hiker and I want to be the youngest one to do the at. 2. I would like to see what my limits are for hiking. 3. It would be fun to be outdoors for a long time. 4. I think that it would be fun to brag about. 5. It will be great for me. david
If I could add a new character it would be a girl named Mai even though she just added a new character called Marcy and then she would be a fifth wheel. I would add her to be a new friend and a new story with how they met like the last book I read we mostly about Marcy coming and Brandon. But I would also add a new guy that ether Chloe or Zoey liked she Niki had to deal with her friend have a crush on the new guy and so did Jessica (Mackenzie’s best friend and only because she is a big gossip) and Niki would have to help Chloe or Zoey out. -Taylor
I would add me and my pug to the story. I’m funny and the readers would laugh at my jokes. I love the out doors, which means I’ll have lots of adventres. I like running so I could race in the book. I have a cool personality so I could make friends easily. And finally I have the cutest pug in the world and my friends would love my pug -Kate
If I could add a new character to my book she would be a cat and her name would be Alexa. Alexa would be a beautiful silver cat who would be very brave , smart, grateful, caring, and loving. I would put her in the book so she could be a little companion to Sadie and Saskia. Alexa would also go on adventures with Sadie, Saskia, and Erik. -Max
If I could add a new character to my book it would be me because I would see how the Heffley family lives. To see if I would like Gregory's school. If I would make A LOT of friends (especially Holly Hills because she is popular). See if I can get any boyfriends and to have fun!!!!
If I could add any character to my story I would want Spongebob to be in it. I think that Spongebob will make the book funnier. In the middle of the book Spongebob would go jellyfish hunting randomly. Also I think it will be funny when Spongebob talks to the main character named Mia Thermopolis.
I would add an extra pilot. If there was an extra pilot Brian would not have had to land the plane. Brian doesn't know how to fly and he was scared. If there was another pilot he could sit in the back and help fly when the first pilot had a heart attack. Even if it crashed Brian would have an adult with him and he would feel better. He could also help Brian if he got sick or hurt.
I would add me because I wont to fire a gun. I want to be in the military. To be a S.E.A.L is awesome. The character is obeying, kind , and hard working.
I would like to give Mackince a baby sister. One so she can not have all the attion for once.second so she knows how Nikki fells. Third so she can be hurt for good. Mackices is a brat she needs a test on what hurt fell like.
i would add me.
ReplyDelete1. I am a good hiker and I want to be the youngest one to do the at.
2. I would like to see what my limits are for hiking.
3. It would be fun to be outdoors for a long time.
4. I think that it would be fun to brag about.
5. It will be great for me.
david
If I could add a new character it would be a girl named Mai even though she just added a new character called Marcy and then she would be a fifth wheel. I would add her to be a new friend and a new story with how they met like the last book I read we mostly about Marcy coming and Brandon.
ReplyDeleteBut I would also add a new guy that ether Chloe or Zoey liked she Niki had to deal with her friend have a crush on the new guy and so did Jessica (Mackenzie’s best friend and only because she is a big gossip) and Niki would have to help Chloe or Zoey out.
-Taylor
I would add me and my pug to the story.
ReplyDeleteI’m funny and the readers would laugh at my jokes.
I love the out doors, which means I’ll have lots of adventres.
I like running so I could race in the book.
I have a cool personality so I could make friends easily.
And finally I have the cutest pug in the world and my friends would love my pug
-Kate
I would add me cause I want to kill people in the games. It would be cool. I can learn about fire and weapons. I would be on TV.
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If I could add a new character to my book she would be a cat and her name would be Alexa. Alexa would be a beautiful silver cat who would be very brave , smart, grateful, caring, and loving. I would put her in the book so she could be a little companion to Sadie and Saskia. Alexa would also go on adventures with Sadie, Saskia, and Erik.
ReplyDelete-Max
If I could add a new character to my book it would be me because I would see how the Heffley family lives. To see if I would like Gregory's school. If I would make A LOT of friends (especially Holly Hills because she is popular). See if I can get any boyfriends and to have fun!!!!
ReplyDelete-Sarah <3 :D
If I could add any character to my story I would want Spongebob to be in it. I think that Spongebob will make the book funnier. In the middle of the book Spongebob would go jellyfish hunting randomly. Also I think it will be funny when Spongebob talks to the main character named Mia Thermopolis.
ReplyDeleteTali
Tali, this made me laugh!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D!!!!!!!!
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I would add an extra pilot. If there was an extra pilot Brian would not have had to land the plane. Brian doesn't know how to fly and he was scared. If there was another pilot he could sit in the back and help fly when the first pilot had a heart attack. Even if it crashed Brian would have an adult with him and he would feel better. He could also help Brian if he got sick or hurt.
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I would add me because I wont to fire a gun. I want to be in the military. To be a S.E.A.L is awesome. The character is obeying, kind , and hard working.
ReplyDeleteI would like to give Mackince a baby sister. One so she can not have all the attion for once.second so she knows how Nikki fells. Third so she can be hurt for good. Mackices is a brat she needs a test on what hurt fell like.
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